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Die for your life - the lie. by ~miss-starbuck:iconmiss-starbuck:



The broken train,
kills the bleeding heart,
that tried to run away,
but failed with death in it's soul.
The sweet revenge,
comes at night,
as a doomed spirit of darkness,
that called the devils angels,
to cry out an emptyness of lies.
Gather your dirt,
and make your castle of tears of it,
make the water flow through it,
and destroy everything you've created.
Let the blessed one,
Bring you thorns for dinner,
let it bring you hatred to your self.
Try to kill the time,
that takes someone else you care for,
and burie it alive.
In years to come,
you've walked so far,
but you stand on the same spot
you died for.
©2006-2008 ~miss-starbuck
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sorry for any miss spelling and stuff.. just wrote it, I kinda am in a dark mood at the moment.

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~pressed-in-a-book:iconpressed-in-a-book: Sep 20, 2006, 3:12:53 AM
i like it.
im thick though and am not sure what its about..
but nice work
you seem to have a way with words
~miss-starbuck:iconmiss-starbuck: Sep 23, 2006, 1:54:31 AM
thanks :)

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..Life is beautiful...In many ways..
~pressed-in-a-book:iconpressed-in-a-book: Sep 24, 2006, 3:27:36 PM
its okay
i wish i could understand it more
lol :)
~miss-starbuck:iconmiss-starbuck: Sep 26, 2006, 3:07:26 AM
yeah I write kind of hard poetry so to speak, that makes you THINK of every line what I mean and stuff :)

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..Life is beautiful...In many ways..
~pressed-in-a-book:iconpressed-in-a-book: Nov 5, 2006, 6:01:43 PM
yeah thats the kind i like best :)